Kieran-s's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clucky Ep4: The Mound]

Errrr

I have to admit that that is the most annoying theme song I've ever heard. Please try and put together something less annoying, and maybe some plot. Otherwise, lipsyncing was pretty good. Try harder man.

Brewster responds:

A new theme song is in the works.

[Red vs. Blue]

Hmm

I think the concept is way too generic, and it wasn't very epic either. Try thinking through what music you'll use and maybe put more thought into what you are actually going to animate. Other than that, keep practicing.

IcyLime responds:

Yeah I know it sucked. You know what? I'm just going to kill myself right now.

[Dead Episode 1: Dead]

wow

I dont know any alley ninjas that stab people in the eye. But this was alright, just a bit short. I also liked the lack of colour.

Harlandgirl responds:

Its supposed to be more of a murderer covering his face with a mask, but unfortunately it does look more like a ninja

[Social Anxiety]

Well

To be honest I didnt really understand. It seemed to portray social anxiety pretty well through animation and sound effects none the less. It was interesting but a little too wierd. Good job though.

secv responds:

lol "...a little too weird."

Thanks. :)

[Pokeball Problems]

Hmm

Not too bad. Didn't really find it funny and your animation needs a bit of work. Try adding more sound effects.

ikool responds:

I tried to keep away from sound effects since it messed with the feel of the animation. And yea, this was my first time doing a serious hand-drawn animation :3

[SHORT-Teh Dot Collab Pt12]

What

I know it is a piece for a collab but it looks generic as hell. Its for a collab with "teh" in it and I just think the idea itself is boring. Animation needs work and try and put more detail into it.

Bloodman101 responds:

Yeah I know, I thought the collab idea was a bit boring too.
Still fun to animate though.

['Whirlpool Chicken']

.....

That was one of the most pointlessly mindless thing I have ever seen for a while. And I really liked it. It was simple, wierd and just had a nice style to it. I liked the music also. You should develope on the characters and you will create something really unique and nice.

Butzbo responds:

Hehr...Yes, i think i should 'settle down' with some characters, and start making a series or something..,.I'm not very sure on how to develope this ones, but is still a nice idea.,
Hehr,thanks!

[Legend Of Dragons Preview]

Hmm

I think you deffinatley over used glow, blur and bevel. It made it difficult to watch. But I'm not rating it because of that. You need to work on your animation and less on your presentation. The music was a little annoying, but the animation on the characters movements was the one thing that needed improvement if anything.

raremasta responds:

sorry about that, i'll be fixing that in the second Series

[ObliviaFantasyEP1]

Hmm

To be honest it dragged on for too long. The story and voices where good and I can see alot of effort that went into this. It was just too slow moving. It lacked detail, I couldn't stand the closeups on the sprites. Also alot of the lines had different volume. A seven though, for the good effort.

BlazingGamer responds:

Indeed it dragged on far too long, that I agree! Thank you!

[Life's Good]

OMG WHO'S DRIVING?!?!!?!

It had a nice style. But the animation was a bit jerky. I like how it was all silouhettes and stuff.

Xennethy responds:

Yes there's no one driving!!!